Today's Lesson

• Essay 2-02b (due 2014.11.21) Writing Studio Blog Calendar
• Including APA-style references from
• Essays 2-02b 
• Weekly book reviews
• Bibliography updates 
• Essays 2-02b
• Weekly book reviews
• Portfolio Elements (PE)updates
• Essays 2-02b (2014.11.21)
• Weekly book reviews (BRs) BR2-11,12,13
• Today menu
• Out line new post (compose)
• Reverse outlines of Essays 2-02b
• Paragraph topic outlines
• Microsoft Word : View Outline
• Titles of posts

• Screen shot command + shift + 4

Today's Lesson

Commenting on ALL classmates essays (2-02a)
Sharing of comments on your own essays

Best comments on Essays and Plans for Revisions
Google form in mail, 2014.11.19
Revised essays
Due in new posts on individual blogs by 5 p.m, 2014.11.21
Essay content
Essay organization
Paragraph formation
Sentence structure
Word choice
Writing style
Depersonalized, formalized, and generalized
References
Accurate and complete APA-style references for ALL soueces of information in your essays(movies, websites,...)

Today's lesson

1.Out-going comments on classmates 'Essay 2-02a'

• Work your way DOWN list
• Post PQRS comments on each other group's essays
• When you encounter the same groups' essays
• Vary your comments, which ALL should include
• Praise 
• Questions
• Reflections
• Suggestions

2.Proto Portfolios update

3.Responses to in-coming comments on your own essays

H.W

(Finish commenting on classmates' essays)

Finish responding to in-coming comments

(Comment on near-peers' essays [1A on 1C, 1C on 1A])

Begin planning and composing revised essays

Essays 2-02b: NEW due date: Nov. 21.2012

Continue making routine weekly posts

Book Reviews BR 2-09, BR2-10, BR2-11(or more)

Typing trials

Other posts on topics of your choice.

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Today's lesson

Group work
Joint essays
in Google docs.

Essay 2-02a 13○○　13○○ 13○○ (five digits number)

including references for All web site