BR2-15:Cinderella

"Cinderella! shouted her stepmother, looking up from a letter"(Fiorin, 2004, p. 3).

I have read ever this story. I like this story very much. This heroine is very cute and very nice. Also I want to be her. Cinderella always works very harder. I thought that she is very nice. she was used very harder by sisters. I thought taht why she worked very harder. Sister always looks down on Cinderella. Sister of Cinderella seems very illnature. Sister of Cinderella changed one after another for clothes. Cinderella takes care of sisters. Sister of Cinderella always came in very violent. Cinderella seems very tired because she was very worked harder. Cinderella seems very sad because she couldn't go to the party. I thought that she wanted to go to thr party. Also I think that she should go to the party. Suddenly, This person appeard at Cinderella. She was the Savior for Cinderella. She brought her very nice report. She handed over for Cinderella big pumpkin. She got for Cinderella many things. For example, a horsedrawn carriage of pumpkin is very interesting. I want to ride this. Cinderella seems very surprised by a witch. Cinserella changed clothes very nice dress. Cinderella seems very nice. Cinderella becomes very nice. Cinderella was pay attention by everyone. Cinderella was invited by very nice guy. Sister of Cinderella saw very illnature for Cinderella. They tried to ignore for Cinderella. I thought that they were very jealousy. Cinderella has a limit. Cinderella has to go back to the hoome until 12 o'clock. Cinderella parted from the pprincess. The prince seems very at a loss. Cinderella didn't teach own name for the prince even. The prince seems very sad because Cinderella was dissapeard from the prince. Cinderella went back home very quickly. Sister of Cinderella seems very angrly because Cinderella was visited from the prince. The prince picked up the glass shoe. The shoe is Cinderella's shoe. The prince was searching the owner of the glass shoe. Sister of Cinderella weared the glass shoe but they couldn't wear it. The prince said that what bout this girl?  Sister of Cinderella said that she is just a servant. Cinderella could wear the glass shoe. Then sister of Cinderella seems very mortifying. The prince could meet Cinderella again. They seems very happy. To meet they are faate. I think that the witch helped they. Also the witch changed Cinderella very beautiful dress Cinderella is very beautiful. Sister of Cinderella said that we want to marry the prince. I thought that Cinderella couldn't happy for the first time. I thought that Cinderella was very do her best so she could go the party. Cinderella is very happy woman.

Fiorin, Fabiano. (2004)Cinderella,Britain, London: University of Surrey Roehampton.

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