Today's lesson

Main points from collective outlines
Responses to PQRS comments on draft essays
Today's menu
Revise draft essays in a Google doc:
(Cover main points from collective outlines)
Collective Maps and [Rough] Outlines (2014.12.03)
Mention main points in introductory paragraph
Add information from responses to comments on drafts
Summarize main points in concluding paragraph
Check the entire text with
      Google docs
      Microsoft Word
     Paper Rater
     Text Edit
Post revised essays in a new post by Friday
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Essay 2-03b
Book Reviews
Essay 2-03b, 2014.12.19